{"id":199,"date":"2005-11-28T19:38:55","date_gmt":"2005-11-29T01:38:55","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/grammar.editormum.com\/?p=199"},"modified":"2011-01-30T13:14:56","modified_gmt":"2011-01-30T19:14:56","slug":"what-does-an-editor-do","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/grammar.editormum.com\/?p=199","title":{"rendered":"What Does an Editor Do?"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I&#8217;m amazed at the number of first-time writers who think that  they can call me up, send me their manuscript (MS), and let me go  through it once &#8212; then send it off to McGraw-Hill, Penguin, or  Scholastic and have the next <em>Harry Potter<\/em> on their hands.<\/p>\n<p>It  just doesn&#8217;t work that way. I&#8217;m a freelance, front-line editor and  proofer. I get your MS into shape so that a full-time, publishing editor  will actually put it in his pile of things to look at, rather than his  slush pile or, worse, his garbage pile.<\/p>\n<p>When you send me your  MS, the first thing I&#8217;m going to do is reformat it. Generally, your MS  should be in 12-point, monospaced typeface, such as Courier,  double-spaced, with one-inch margins on all sides of the page. Yeah,  okay, it&#8217;s not &#8220;pretty&#8221; that way, but the editors don&#8217;t care about  pretty. They care about word-count and page-count. And they can estimate  those two numbers a whole lot better if you give them a MS that&#8217;s in a  standard font with a standard number of lines having a standard  line-length.<\/p>\n<p>Then I&#8217;m going to take out the old red pen &#8212; some  editors use blue, but I prefer red. It stands out more and gets your  attention. When you get your first-round draft back from me, it&#8217;s going  to look like I bled on it. What your Freshman Comp teacher did to your  first assignment in that class is <strong><em>nothing<\/em><\/strong> to  what I&#8217;m going to do to your &#8220;baby.&#8221; So be prepared. First round is for  focusing on spelling, grammar, diction (word choice), and consistency.  If your hero was born in Tokyo on page 10, but says he was born in Osaka  on page 96, I&#8217;m going to make a note in the margin. If your heroine has  blue eyes on page 3, and you say that her &#8220;chocolate-coloured eyes  slowly filled with tears&#8221; on page 27, I&#8217;m going to call you on it. If  you invariably use &#8220;their&#8221; instead of &#8220;they&#8217;re&#8221; or &#8220;to&#8221; instead of  &#8220;too,&#8221; I may note on the cover page that you need to do a universal  search for the offending word and correct each instance yourself.<\/p>\n<p>Once  I&#8217;ve gone over the MS a couple or three times, I will return it to you  for correction. If you don&#8217;t understand a correction, call or e-mail. A  good, professional editor welcomes questions. She wants you to  understand why she&#8217;s marked a change. At this stage, when you&#8217;re dealing  strictly with mechanics, trust her. She&#8217;s gonna be right nine times out  of ten. Indubitably. She doesn&#8217;t stay in business by giving you bad  grammar advice. Happy customers come back and bring their friends &#8212;  and she knows this.<\/p>\n<p>After you&#8217;ve gone through and made  corrections, you send the MS back to me and I proof it again. This time, I&#8217;m  not looking so much for grammar and spelling, though I will probably  catch a few of those. This time, I&#8217;m looking critically at the story  itself. Does the plot make sense? Do the parts fit together well? This  time, I&#8217;m looking at the story as a reader, and asking if this story is  one that makes me want to keep reading. Have you changed viewpoints too  much? Do you suddenly change styles? This time, when I mark notes in the  margin, they will be more along the lines of suggestions, and you will  want to discuss them at length with me before you accept or reject them.<\/p>\n<p>After  we&#8217;ve done that review of the second-round edit together and you&#8217;ve  made the changes you accepted, I&#8217;ll go through it once more, just to  make sure we haven&#8217;t missed anything really egregious. Then you are  ready to start submitting to publishers.<\/p>\n<p>This is a long process  that requires patience and a thick skin. You are going to get  rejections. Don&#8217;t get impatient and circumvent the process by  self-publishing after a half-dozen rejections. Most of the  self-published books in this world really aren&#8217;t worth the ink and paper  they are printed on. There are a few exceptions, but the general rule  is that if an author has to resort to self-publishing, he&#8217;s not really  ready for the big-time yet. Publishers&#8217; editors <strong><em>do<\/em><\/strong> know what will sell. They are keenly aware of the trends that readers  are following, and of what is likely to succeed and what isn&#8217;t. And they  <strong><em>do<\/em><\/strong> know talent &#8212; and lack of it &#8212; when  they see it. A lot of new authors come on the scene every day, and many  of them really need to spend some more time honing their craft,  perfecting the art of writing, before they are ready for publication.<\/p>\n<p>Be  patient. Be prepared to take constructive &#8212; and even non-constructive  &#8212; criticism, and learn from it how to better your writing skills.  Your editor can help. But she can&#8217;t perform miracles. You&#8217;re not going  to be published six weeks after you first give her your MS. But if you  are prepared to work hard, be patient, and learn from doing, you might  have a good start within a year or two.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I&#8217;m amazed at the number of first-time writers who think that they can call me up, send me their manuscript (MS), and let me go through it once &#8212; then send it off to McGraw-Hill, Penguin, or Scholastic and have the next Harry Potter on their hands. It just doesn&#8217;t work that way. 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